Here I am

0:00

Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.

20 Comments

Leave a comment

Jane Skylar

Author

4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @janeskylar, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'Here I am'! 💥 Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? You're off beat on this, try and pay a little more attention to when your bars land on the track. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Why don't you hop on a Masterclass next to really start honing your skills! To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

T.blaze 🎶🎙

4 years ago

Good job peep #taste9

Alfred Amaru

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

👑 Melinated King👑

4 years ago

@janeskylar send some support and likes back to my 2 new songs..#OnlyHuman2

L̆̈♟ᐯㄚ #CB5 ⛽️ 👈🏾♨️🪬

4 years ago

📛this not bad ✅ #Skreets