What's up @tutupiamon,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'smizzylion ft tutupiamon'! π₯
The vocals are a lil' loud. That's OK, just slide the volume down a bit and you've got yourself a perfect mix.
Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ
Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. πΌ
Yeahhhh this one's got us gassed up! π₯΅
Loved the "beach" rhyme scheme, that was clean.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @tutupiamon, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'smizzylion ft tutupiamon'! π₯ The vocals are a lil' loud. That's OK, just slide the volume down a bit and you've got yourself a perfect mix. Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. πΆ Nice choice of beat, this is sounding nice with your delivery style. πΌ Yeahhhh this one's got us gassed up! π₯΅ Loved the "beach" rhyme scheme, that was clean. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Thanks everyone good bless you all
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
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