Hey @thebojangles,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'On Fire (Demo)', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ
Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. ๐ง
Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly.
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks.
Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
in my opinion bro practice makes perfect
keep working at it and honing
craft delivery is key I've been writing since I was 16
and my delivery still need work
keep grindin fs.. you gotta match your passion with your delivery. sometimes it is best to slow down. vibe with the music, dont let it vibe with you.
i applaud you for the effort.
we need more tho.
you got this.
plutowrrld.
Bars: Can improve ๐
Delivery: Can improve ๐
Impression: Can improve ๐
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Hey @thebojangles, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'On Fire (Demo)', here are our thoughts ๐ฅ Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. ๐ง Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Maybe give one of the Masterclasses a go, it's great way to help your timing on tracks. Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
this is decent work bro , take time with writing ,practice delivery, it's not a race , great music is the goal , keep diggin you got bars ๐ค๐ค
autism's is a gift brother use it right, freestyle lyrics?
I see potential u should write
@BoJangle I need your ear for my new song. #WorldWide2
in my opinion bro practice makes perfect keep working at it and honing craft delivery is key I've been writing since I was 16 and my delivery still need work
@nate_west Thank you! ๐ชโ๏ธโญ๐
Bo jangles at it again keep it going bro Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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keep grindin fs.. you gotta match your passion with your delivery. sometimes it is best to slow down. vibe with the music, dont let it vibe with you. i applaud you for the effort. we need more tho. you got this. plutowrrld. Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Can improve ๐ Impression: Can improve ๐
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I'm listening ๐ง keep going to the top ๐ฉ๐ cloud boy ENT ๐ฌ๏ธ๐จ๏ธ rehabilitation I'm in class evil backwards devil Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ