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looking at the mirror, my reflection dropped a tear, foggy eyes i cant see clear, driving my car has it hard to steer, has my brain in fear, i put my self in gear, never show fear to a peer, stay confident i say to myself as i stare at the mirror , walking in this thick grass damn this life game kicks me in the ass, looking arounds somtimes makes me feel like a idiot in the class, my other me just stares through the glass, what are you doing life will soon pass i stare at that sky what next ... what next, i have intent to show the world on the internet, hopefully one day i earn the check strive for greatness its written on my chest, all the great things the lord gave me im so blessed, notes with a tack on my brain, words just flow through my brain so insaine so you know i keep that pen, when im down i usualy chop in my den, never know when my hand will start writting like a trend, this aint pretend i dont need fake friends, to many of them fuck you over push you under in a deep end, broken friendships i dont mend , if you fucked me over once ull do it agian , so no love for the people in my life that left , dad u hurt me the worst see you agian i hit you in the head but stay away and the people you mess with will still have you dead, everbodys blood is blue but we bleed red, every body tries to float but penny wise is only in thier head, i stand here is this the real me am i myself, or is my other me hiding with stealth, love the rain on a hot day i dont melt, thought so hard my brain swelled , nicotine leave my cell, keeps knocking asking if we can meet at the backdoor take one small hit has me back for more, what could my future have in store, my family is a life time chore, love my family so much to my so ill never close my door,

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7 years ago

looking at the mirror, my reflection dropped a tear, foggy eyes i cant see clear, driving my car has it hard to steer, has my brain in fear, i put my self in gear, never show fear to a peer, stay confident i say to myself as i stare at the mirror , walking in this thick grass damn this life game kicks me in the ass, looking arounds somtimes makes me feel like a idiot in the class, my other me just stares through the glass, what are you doing life will soon pass i stare at that sky what next ... what next, i have intent to show the world on the internet, hopefully one day i earn the check strive for greatness its written on my chest, all the great things the lord gave me im so blessed, notes with a tack on my brain, words just flow through my brain so insaine so you know i keep that pen, when im down i usualy chop in my den, never know when my hand will start writting like a trend, this aint pretend i dont need fake friends, to many of them fuck you over push you under in a deep end, broken friendships i dont mend , if you fucked me over once ull do it agian , so no love for the people in my life that left , dad u hurt me the worst see you agian i hit you in the head but stay away and the people you mess with will still have you dead, everbodys blood is blue but we bleed red, every body tries to float but penny wise is only in thier head, i stand here is this the real me am i myself, or is my other me hiding with stealth, love the rain on a hot day i dont melt, thought so hard my brain swelled , nicotine leave my cell, keeps knocking asking if we can meet at the backdoor take one small hit has me back for more, what could my future have in store, my family is a life time chore, love my family so much to my so ill never close my door,

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7 years ago

thanks Joe collab soon

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