like the rose, sun in my soul
The muse ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถ๐ถrapfame I love you thank you for listening it is because of you I did not quit MENTAL HEALTH MATTERS #best #rapfame this song is for everyone suffering donโt quit you matter to ME #har333ayin #new @moderator_en
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Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Wassup @questionmark9, Thank you for sharing 'like the rose, sun in my soul' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us: You might benefit from turning the vocals down just a little, they're a bit loud in the mix! Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ Awesome narrative, keep up the amazing storytelling! ๐คฏ Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. ๐ถ Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. ๐ This beat choice is great for you! ๐ผ We are loving this message, we appreciate you talking about a topic that needs more of a spotlight. In terms of your rapping, your vocals are a bit high which can hinder the track, if you fix this then this track has unlimited potential! This track is wild, we're crazy impressed. What else you got?? ๐ฅ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Cool go one my nigga letโs go with our Magic Voice ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
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