Hi @markronchi.5395!
Welcome to our feedback of '-M-Fàz33Y'!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @markronchi.5395! Welcome to our feedback of '-M-Fàz33Y'! The beat is fire, nice choice. The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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