1 st Place
I'm bout my paper, my net worth, my over willing attempt to get first, is probably what gives me the rhythm to spit to these verses. Working when I'm off of work as if my work ain't over, and I got no days off. Still it's better than working a cocaine house. Shit I just invent with my elements, cuz I'm not content with my settlement, I was convicted with evidence, and yet I was a victim of government no cap, old hood n****** would know that because it used to mean something when brothers would rock a broke cap, but now, you can't paint a cry on a n****'s eyes, when they're from a place that you ain't surprised that a n**** died. Gary Indiana born, as well as bread, from the outside looking in you would think I ain't have a chance, but I got to where I am through determine plots and planning, feeling like ain't no other option but to get some cash.I was out in the land, just serving rocks with the fam, watching out for the jackers patrolling cops and cameras. Happy to see another day and even more glad if, we can make it out of our poverty through this madness
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I'm bout my paper, my net worth, my over willing attempt to get first, is probably what gives me the rhythm to spit to these verses. Working when I'm off of work as if my work ain't over, and I got no days off. Still it's better than working a cocaine house. Shit I just invent with my elements, cuz I'm not content with my settlement, I was convicted with evidence, and yet I was a victim of government no cap, old hood n****** would know that because it used to mean something when brothers would rock a broke cap, but now, you can't paint a cry on a n****'s eyes, when they're from a place that you ain't surprised that a n**** died. Gary Indiana born, as well as bread, from the outside looking in you would think I ain't have a chance, but I got to where I am through determine plots and planning, feeling like ain't no other option but to get some cash.I was out in the land, just serving rocks with the fam, watching out for the jackers patrolling cops and cameras. Happy to see another day and even more glad if, we can make it out of our poverty through this madness
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Yo @maine_manj219! Waddup - let's take a look at '1 st Place'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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