Pain Evasion

Lil Joiner2.0

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Cook n hot

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @josiahgay! Thanks for sharing 'Pain Evasion ' with us! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Dope recording, nicely done. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Josiah

Author

5 years ago

@Real4Beats I came ready 😎

Josiah

Author

5 years ago

@Real4Beats done. send that heat sis

@LadyBeatz

5 years ago

@josiahgay send it up

Josiah

Author

5 years ago

@Real4Beats ayo I could do better but u gonna have to battle me to find out homie

@LadyBeatz

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: On point 🎯

Dj remexy

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Josiah

Author

5 years ago

I appreciate it homie

Scenario Devine

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Josiah

Author

5 years ago

I'm down for any battle

KOBAIN💯

6 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Adamiyat iman

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Josiah

Author

5 years ago

@Real4Beats bet

(O.T.M)SoljaThaTruth

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

D.O.Y. 🚂💨"POPS" 💨💨

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥