Hey @slleshdafipper!
Thanks for sharing 'Red Jet_Sllesh' with us!
Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through.
Good choice of beat! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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That JWTBeat ๐ฅ when slowed. And cheesebboy VS1 is nice.
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
your song does not go with a beat Bars: 3/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Can improve ๐ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @slleshdafipper! Thanks for sharing 'Red Jet_Sllesh' with us! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Good choice of beat! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@lking_mano ayy thanks man appreciate it ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐
@Sllesh check out my new track
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Killed it! ๐ฏ Respect ๐ค๐ค Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ