Can you see my halo

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @brookstarink, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'Can you see my halo '! 💥 We can feel you rapping some real stuff on this one! "I'm never gonna f*cking quit" - we can feel the determination in your voice and fully vibe with this! Keep strong and doing your thing! This track has a nice rhythm to it. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 The beat is so emotive, the intermittent piano really gives those heartbreak vibes! The recording quality needs improvement, this will help your track a lot and using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 The vocals are also a little quiet on this one! You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Brooke Elizabeth Woodward

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4 years ago

I only smoke weed and I haven't had any because I'm in the looney bin in Brisbane because I crashes my car and I was living inn it

Daniel B.

4 years ago

bro wtf how much meth are u on?

The 1 one

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Elijah Thomas

7 months ago