Hey @londonartis,
Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'For My Homies'! π₯
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ The track has meaning. π
Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Your voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! π
Recording vocals sound a bit muffled fam. A good workaround can be adding a little bit of reverb to the vocals to make them pop just a little bit amongst the beats. Love that beginner passion you sound like you still have on this fam! The hook could use some work; just a little bit more attention paid to the pitch you singing at. Keep working!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @londonartis, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'For My Homies'! π₯ We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ The track has meaning. π Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. πΆ Your voice syncs up to the beat perfectly, nice timing! π Recording vocals sound a bit muffled fam. A good workaround can be adding a little bit of reverb to the vocals to make them pop just a little bit amongst the beats. Love that beginner passion you sound like you still have on this fam! The hook could use some work; just a little bit more attention paid to the pitch you singing at. Keep working! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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