DeadBeat Attempts
Cool calm and collect face palm and reflect I pull time and intellect I search the creaks like a prospector Before I enter the mainstream like a lost extra I’m shooting alien scenes and it’ll cost extra Dead beat attempts to play out my dreams like a Ghost actor Dead beat after my attempts I’m Socrates on a soccer team my fans corrupted and shit The scores all fucked up on hemlock Ima decompose ya after my speech compose a Beethoven classic and timeless I’m a graphic and spineless far from rhymless Book of rhymes cause No cover can top me No end matter can define me No blurb will summarise me I burb smoke Os when I let my mind sleep after executing slurped cones I still find herb when I’m broke as bones and bet a blind leap I still grind words into nine sheets drum beats the heart of a song call me Oda Lamar equally important as pain to not hurt yourself again in all the hate of since and still curb disturb strait up illegally import to the game by the state of things like pirates bay enjoy my hideaway I’m in Tortuga i wonder if you get a shorter stairway by following the fat Bhudda if I was rich today I’d fill stomachs like a pornstar make sick kids have thick ribs and educate each internal compass to point at the Northstar that’s the top of the world that feeling you get like top from your girl a salty extravagant snack on a meal the only thing you get from in quality is real I’ll get my name out like Nicholas Too Nicholas who? saint tesla or last tsar combine the lot and I’m a gifted wrapper building an empire as fast as a car two fathers and one son like sword fighting I’m a marlin king in this ocean Merlin concucting potions you couldn’t win a duel I’ll put you on your ass like a broken stool no legs can wear my pants no feet can fit my shoes I’m not a beached whale I’m Adolph Finn? nah Adolph German disguised shark jaws like Putin repeating history Rasputin level of influence to re live in misery Newton of information, looking for the best this decade well take this human into consideration fire breathing lizard admire the bleeding blizzard of the empire leading wizard conjuring you an image Deadbeat attempts on this cardiac monitor Deadbeat against the unknown like the zodiac killer running another kilomiter put me on any tune and I’ll make a deadbeat like the heart of a killer I’m hungry for red meat Microsoft spreadsheets and count my bars just like counting stars just like daddies Microsoft cock excell at your spread cheeks it ain’t random stories these are where my mind day dreams Mixing realities with a potent mind leaves more then seven seas and seven wonders for exploring my sky’s limit infinite well planned and intricate Just hoping a pair of ears will get into it Maybe even in a phew years we can grab a pair of bears and drink with it Seven years passing in the blink of an eye I’ll think of my life and what I did or didn’t try A man built for the task Amen I put on a mask and play this facade Hopeing for listeners to the prophet Flowing simpler to make a profit None of y’all can stop it All of y’all can block it My nuts in a sock-yet Just trying to loosen my screw I’m not trying to pocket Slim shady or pretend to be new Just rhyming words that I already knew
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Cool calm and collect face palm and reflect I pull time and intellect I search the creaks like a prospector Before I enter the mainstream like a lost extra I’m shooting alien scenes and it’ll cost extra Dead beat attempts to play out my dreams like a Ghost actor Dead beat after my attempts I’m Socrates on a soccer team my fans corrupted and shit The scores all fucked up on hemlock Ima decompose ya after my speech compose a Beethoven classic and timeless I’m a graphic and spineless far from rhymless Book of rhymes cause No cover can top me No end matter can define me No blurb will summarise me I burb smoke Os when I let my mind sleep after executing slurped cones I still find herb when I’m broke as bones and bet a blind leap I still grind words into nine sheets drum beats the heart of a song call me Oda Lamar equally important as pain to not hurt yourself again in all the hate of since and still curb disturb strait up illegally import to the game by the state of things like pirates bay enjoy my hideaway I’m in Tortuga i wonder if you get a shorter stairway by following the fat Bhudda if I was rich today I’d fill stomachs like a pornstar make sick kids have thick ribs and educate each internal compass to point at the Northstar that’s the top of the world that feeling you get like top from your girl a salty extravagant snack on a meal the only thing you get from in quality is real I’ll get my name out like Nicholas Too Nicholas who? saint tesla or last tsar combine the lot and I’m a gifted wrapper building an empire as fast as a car two fathers and one son like sword fighting I’m a marlin king in this ocean Merlin concucting potions you couldn’t win a duel I’ll put you on your ass like a broken stool no legs can wear my pants no feet can fit my shoes I’m not a beached whale I’m Adolph Finn? nah Adolph German disguised shark jaws like Putin repeating history Rasputin level of influence to re live in misery Newton of information, looking for the best this decade well take this human into consideration fire breathing lizard admire the bleeding blizzard of the empire leading wizard conjuring you an image Deadbeat attempts on this cardiac monitor Deadbeat against the unknown like the zodiac killer running another kilomiter put me on any tune and I’ll make a deadbeat like the heart of a killer I’m hungry for red meat Microsoft spreadsheets and count my bars just like counting stars just like daddies Microsoft cock excell at your spread cheeks it ain’t random stories these are where my mind day dreams Mixing realities with a potent mind leaves more then seven seas and seven wonders for exploring my sky’s limit infinite well planned and intricate Just hoping a pair of ears will get into it Maybe even in a phew years we can grab a pair of bears and drink with it Seven years passing in the blink of an eye I’ll think of my life and what I did or didn’t try A man built for the task Amen I put on a mask and play this facade Hopeing for listeners to the prophet Flowing simpler to make a profit None of y’all can stop it All of y’all can block it My nuts in a sock-yet Just trying to loosen my screw I’m not trying to pocket Slim shady or pretend to be new Just rhyming words that I already knew
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Hi @ossmc! Welcome to our feedback of 'DeadBeat Attempts'! 💥 Strong bars on this, keep it up! 🙌 Good rhyming here, keep it up! ✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Smooth delivery here, keep it up! 🎶 It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen! Try adding some of the in-app effect to your next track to take it to a whole new level. Think your lyrics are 100% fire. The delivery needs some work. Need to put more effort into adjusting the tone of your voice. We hope you send us some more tracks in the future, we would love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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