Hey @pablocornejo.928,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Living in a savage world', here are our thoughts π₯
The beat is slightly overpowering, turn up your vocals for a better mix.
Good bars here, defo works here! π Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨
This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Nice timing! Never left the beat once!
This beat choice is great for you! πΌ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @pablocornejo.928, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Living in a savage world', here are our thoughts π₯ The beat is slightly overpowering, turn up your vocals for a better mix. Good bars here, defo works here! π Good rhyming here, keep it up! β¨ This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Nice timing! Never left the beat once! This beat choice is great for you! πΌ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. There's clearly talent there, keep grindin' and soon you will be a top tier rapper. π€ It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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