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Hey @martezzwiley.6697090, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'mary kate in ashley'! π₯ Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. π Some nice rhyming on this, we hear you! You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. πΆ You'r riding that beat flawlessly, so confident. Great work. π Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ Seems to be a tiny bit of distortion on the vocal here! Try rectifying this to perfect your sound! π You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! π€ We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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