EVER SEEN SOMETHING, 'SPIRITUAL'
feels like something watchin me shiver through my body, tha times wrong in sync with my heart beat can't afford to let my nerves break, can't afford to make mistakes, opportunity keep coming darkness whispers, now it's feels like my hands of idel, feel my spirit in survival, many faces changin in tha people I know, many takers envy things that I own, poisoning tha seeds around I'm trying to grow, tryin to feel my flow tryin be like water gotta move,. head and heart separated when it rains then it pours, stakes high when its ya heart / sole, demons all around me trying reiv slow im spiritually walking in another realm, teaches me im not alone, have you ever had a dream in side a dream woke up in a different zone sitting on a different throne, so hard not to change on full moon's, hard to explain when the feeling real, devil all around me tryin reveal, spiritual, ever seen spirits dancing only on full moon's ever seen something so un-natreal lose control, ever seen a lost sole Rome around in ya cell, ever seen a face change form into the devils own, spiritual,
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feels like something watchin me shiver through my body, tha times wrong in sync with my heart beat can't afford to let my nerves break, can't afford to make mistakes, opportunity keep coming darkness whispers, now it's feels like my hands of idel, feel my spirit in survival, many faces changin in tha people I know, many takers envy things that I own, poisoning tha seeds around I'm trying to grow, tryin to feel my flow tryin be like water gotta move,. head and heart separated when it rains then it pours, stakes high when its ya heart / sole, demons all around me trying reiv slow im spiritually walking in another realm, teaches me im not alone, have you ever had a dream in side a dream woke up in a different zone sitting on a different throne, so hard not to change on full moon's, hard to explain when the feeling real, devil all around me tryin reveal, spiritual, ever seen spirits dancing only on full moon's ever seen something so un-natreal lose control, ever seen a lost sole Rome around in ya cell, ever seen a face change form into the devils own, spiritual,
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