HOOKED FA LIFE
MADE THIS WHEN I WAS 13 WAT YOU THINK IS IT BARS OR I SHOULDA STOPPED WHEN I WAS 13 ??? #JX6 #exclusive #new #trending @moderator_en
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this track is ๐ฅ homie tell me what you think #markc๐ฅ๐
What's up @jushiixjx6, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'HOOKED FA LIFE '! ๐ฅ The vocal recording quality is great, don't change how you do it. ๐ค You got great bars here. ๐ A great rhyme scheme takes work. Try rewording and playing around with the speed of delivery to improve the structure. Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! Cover is dope and super creative. Engaging like a mf fr! Keep the creativity up! Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. ๐ค We can't wait to hear your next fire track! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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