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We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π
Love your melodic flows on this! They honestly coming clean! π§Ό
You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π
Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ
Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track!π
Bless energy, such chill vibes here. π
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @tooturnttristan! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Slipping Away'! π₯ We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. π Love your melodic flows on this! They honestly coming clean! π§Ό You defo have the ability to hit this beat hard, just try and maintain this throughout the whole track! π Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. πΌ Improving the audio quality would seriously level up this track!π Bless energy, such chill vibes here. π Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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