Hey @sylvesterpearson,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Cool Kids'! 💥
Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧
Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏
This beat is working well for you! 🎼
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do!
You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @sylvesterpearson, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Cool Kids'! 💥 Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Think about where your rhymes fall to give a natural flow to the track. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. 🙏 This beat is working well for you! 🎼 We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! You've got the talent, keep grindin' and puttin in the work and who knows what you can achieve! 👌 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
@sylvesterpearson I need your ear for my new songs. #Scared2ComeOutside
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