Hey @ellie.7030085,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'All I Want'! 💥
Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic!
You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼
The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them.
We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @ellie.7030085, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'All I Want'! 💥 Try cleaning up the vocal recording quality by recording a little closer to the mic! You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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