Hey @bigdaddylivewire,
Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'PAIN', here are our thoughts π₯
Great recording quality on this, we can hear you perfectly. π€
We like the bars, well written! Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Ain't no need for a pen and pad when your dome can do this! Nice freestyle!!
You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! π
Yoda flow is really dope on here. Love how you flying on this beat, and just doing your own thing! Maybe add a little bit of delay Reverb next time it'll sound a lot better!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @bigdaddylivewire, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'PAIN', here are our thoughts π₯ Great recording quality on this, we can hear you perfectly. π€ We like the bars, well written! Your rhyming is tight. β¨ Ain't no need for a pen and pad when your dome can do this! Nice freestyle!! You're riding this beat with perfect timing, love it! π Yoda flow is really dope on here. Love how you flying on this beat, and just doing your own thing! Maybe add a little bit of delay Reverb next time it'll sound a lot better! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! π€ We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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