-P o i S e n o u S LuV- _-SheA.-Z.-_

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-P o i S e n o u S  LuV-  _-SheA.-Z.-_

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

Hey @k.morenoqto1, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for '-P o i S e n o u S LuV- _-SheA.-Z.-_'! 💥 Good bars here, defo works here! 🙌 We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Keep flowing on the beat like this, the delivery on this track is smooth. 🎶 Your timing is great, nicely done. 🌠 This beat choice is great for you! 🎼 The hook on this is smooth and super catchy, you know how to build intensity to match the beat and your lyricism is strong too. You know how to paint a vivid picture on a track, just work on improving the audio quality a little, maybe ease off the vocal effects and think about a little more flow variety! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! 💪 It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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4 years ago

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2 months ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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4 years ago

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