What's up @jay28official,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'You're Mine - Jay 28 ft Lady'! 💥
Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶
The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done!
This is super chill, a real nice vibe. 🌊
DAAAAAAAMN! Love the cohesion between the male and female vocals on here. Mixed very well. This some hood classic type sh*t! Only the real can appreciate this. Please put this on streaming. Keep it up. MC.
Honestly, you are a serious talent, we can see big things coming your way! 💯
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
YOOO THIS SHIT IS HOTTT, you got a future, keep on doing your thing okay? let’s support each other, I’m 15 so, femme honest feedback like I’m giving you 🤝🎶😈🔥🥵
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Impression: Perfect 💯
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We shared this on the Rap Fame Tik Tok & Youtube! Love this song!
What's up @jay28official, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'You're Mine - Jay 28 ft Lady'! 💥 Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. ✨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 The vocal recording quality is good! Nicely done! This is super chill, a real nice vibe. 🌊 DAAAAAAAMN! Love the cohesion between the male and female vocals on here. Mixed very well. This some hood classic type sh*t! Only the real can appreciate this. Please put this on streaming. Keep it up. MC. Honestly, you are a serious talent, we can see big things coming your way! 💯 It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
OMG!!! you're just too good in this sh*t....I giva a 💯🔥 1❤️
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