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Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'You're Mine - Jay 28 ft Lady'! π₯
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It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
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We shared this on the Rap Fame Tik Tok & Youtube! Love this song!
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