Jaiil$on$waG

3 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Yo @queen_dom_vee, It's time for us to take a look at 'run up'! 💥 The shock value will only get you so far! Gotta clean up the lyrics if you wanna hit that wider appeal. Okay, we hear the bars! Nice lyrics on this. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ The track has meaning. 👍 We rate the bounce you bring to the beat with your flow! Try switchin' this up as the track goes on to create a bit more engagement & variety on this one! 👊 You def got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 This beat is working super well for you! 🎼 Its awesome how you go from English -> Spanish & back! Sick how you can do both! The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? This would take your tune to the next level! ⬆️ Keep making small improvements and you'll get there in no time! 👌 We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Adamiyat iman

3 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉