Don Sparta
Don Sparta

waka up

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please like my Rap battle Please Homie Thanks Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

2 years ago

Hey @donsparta.5283, Thanks for taking the time and letting us give feedback on 'waka up'! ๐Ÿ’ฅ Your tracks would be of much greater quality if you use headphones next time. ๐ŸŽง The beat is slightly overpowering, turn up your vocals for a better mix. This would help people relate to your bars better! There is some nice rhyming on this, we hear you!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ Overall, your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! ๐ŸŽถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. ๐ŸŽผ This could be a great track with just a few tweaks! Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! ๐Ÿ‘Œ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! ๐Ÿ’ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐Ÿ˜Ž

2 years ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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