What's up @sailorroad67,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'kalla'! π₯
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @sailorroad67, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'kalla'! π₯ We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. πΆ You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is dope and really works for this track. πΌ Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. π€ Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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