Frien-emy

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12 Jan 2022

~Frien-emy~ been watching people often flocking to vomit long begotten to rotting like a colony of seagulls revolving like needles on clocks tick-tocking sequels following prequels of all of their evils the implementation of common sense ain't even that complex to comprehend when its basic concept is just to let bullshit comments get left forgotten so they can't make progress you've got to hault the propagation of nonsense if you wish to see and end to its creation but if we went in this circle all day you'd never see any fucking changes his appearance gets fearsome maliciously livid lyrically gifted other lyricists listen only hearing their limit when they're simplistic it's a sick twist of fate when the record spins at this dizzying rate for these lames to eat shit like a loo brick ate Cause I'm a speed demon so baring my crazy Needs more seasoned experience than salty noobs who try to race me only to end up losing when they mistake my raging for anything but ruthless when the truth is they can't match my pacing when I'm a metaphoric dragon who spits so amazing it sets pages ablazing a nuisance to the crudeness of convoluted lunatics exclaiming delusions they're the new shit but those who itch to make such proclamations of fame while vilely trying to defame the rest are insane if they think they can aim to be the best when they don't demonstrate anything greater than making a buzz like every other fucking pest I've mastered this craft so cheese gets A graded by a talented mind with reason to haze them challenged their lies grievances gave when I'm imbalancing hype with heaping helpings like take this! slaughtering nonsense like I'm on a crusade but I ain't blaming God since I acknowledge my blame and he gave me a conscience so that doesn't make it okay to claim this as God sent when I've got all this hate I despise all the flaunting that the false prophets praise and admonish concepts to which gossips frolic with haste fuck money, fame, drugs and thug ways these G's are just fleas and I'm itching for change heart harnessing harmful armaments carnage alarming when targeting guarded monuments shark's jaws cut harsh lines in water this ominous sharpened like knives to mar farses with bars arc like dowsing rods toward well-known truths whenever I barge with smarts to baptize them in chastisement capsizing self-aggrandisement but ironically, it's not that hard when they're this dense so fat lies get flat-lined when I pass by like a fat fly drowns in an ocean of sense though I'm tired of the devotion to admonish them so I'm hoping to open more minds when my rhymes split wigs it isn't a front but though can call it tough love or whatever you wish but I'll keep hitting dumb fucks until dumb stuff doesn't exist. ~Justin Farrow #jduhbfrienemy

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2 years ago

Wassup @jduhb, Thank you for sharing 'Frien-emy' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Great timing on the beat, there were only a couple of moments where it slipped. Keep working on your delivery, you're hittin' the beat really well, but just make sure you relax and take your time to develop your own style and flow! 🔥 The beat is fire, nice choice. 🎼 The menacing vibes really add to this one! Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try our Masterclass feature, to help progress your sound! This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! 👌 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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