I definitely feel like you would nice flow I'd like to see more passion in your creativity but keep pushing bro I hope to see you support me in some of my music
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Yo @axel.6693251!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Sunrise n Sunsets'! ๐ฅ
Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง
Good bars here, defo works here! ๐
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
This track has a lot of potential, the bars are dope and you only fall off the beat literally a couple of times! However, you need to defo fix that recording quality as the vocals are a bit muffled and we know if this is fixed, the sky is the limit for this track!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! ๐ค
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding and bussin and bussin Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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I definitely feel like you would nice flow I'd like to see more passion in your creativity but keep pushing bro I hope to see you support me in some of my music Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
check me out bro return the favor Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
I really like the beat and the voice looks like fat Joe's Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Yo @axel.6693251! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'Sunrise n Sunsets'! ๐ฅ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง Good bars here, defo works here! ๐ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. ๐ We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. This track has a lot of potential, the bars are dope and you only fall off the beat literally a couple of times! However, you need to defo fix that recording quality as the vocals are a bit muffled and we know if this is fixed, the sky is the limit for this track! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! ๐ค We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
really smooth flow axel ๐ฅ check my new song out yo Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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