DONT KRY
I ain't a killa but dont push me daddy kept it pushing keep it simple have a dream take it in and then redeem plot and plan and plot and scheme mommas still a rolling stone raised 4 children on her own who the fuxk would ever know were getting highfrom low head shoulders knees and toes wait out front but no one shows cope by packing up her nose who the fux can ever grow we cant do this on our own. calculating should of known I seen the signs when I am blown got me in another zone trust issues we should've known love em all from head to toe sacrifice my heart and lungs just to keep the babies young. fuck theres evil all around father son where are you now help me up off of the ground keep me close please bless me now what we dont do for the love if you know what I'm speaking of it's been fuxked up its been rough coming up just ain't enough. thick ass skin this shit is tough let's keep it g andtake the bus baby dont cry you got head up even when it's hard dont cry dont let the sun set on it lesson learned the the hard way hundred million problems I still can't fukin solve them it was a wasting time almost up.there the climb you live once so let ride step it up hold urs high go without yea that's pride cant trust anybody's lies momma please do not cry trust in God he knows why wish I could wipe your eyes look at what we realize we lost our grip were all gone this is dusk that was dawn switch it up on em let's go good ass heart I hope you know in my mind intentions good just a soul misunderstood father can you hear me now begging ah I'm screaming out need that unconditional it's your choice i positional choose up be really wise no one gets to do it twice all these chances are for suckers strap it up yo get the rubbers con cuidado go take cover count your blessing love your lover
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