Dissing Me

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goodness sake, think your this and that but cant even relate, stay in your own lane, you wanted to go first big mistake, i will put you in your place and make your brain ache, ill decapitate your ripcage divide it by eight, feed it to cannibals and bake their turds in a cake, then ill dig a hole in your grave and that is where ill place it, you know your whack as anything and just cant face it, carrying on like your eminem's replacement, but your the type who still lives in your mum's basement, acting all tuff but your the type to take dick, shut the fuck up cause your never going to make it, you dig your own shit but we all hate it, all your getting is pitty votes to those who dont play your shit, your ego's overflown and im here to contain it, off you go bitch we dont need your fake shit, that was mean i apologize sike im wiping your self esteam clean from any bullshit hype, lyrically your a teenage bitch and im pennywise, provoking me in the eyes your just a week bitch in discize, your getting smoked like maraguana or spooned ice, your just a fucking joke and soon ill be the punchline, im gonna choke you like a chicken on lunch time, you must high from dope or anything of the kind,

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ryan

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5 years ago

Lil Joiner2.0

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Wassup @ryan.., Thank you for sharing 'Dissing Me' with our community 💥. Here is a little feedback from us: Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! 🎧 Your vocals are the perfect volume, nicely done. ✅ Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. 👍 Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 The vocals are nicely recorded, soundin' clean! Try experimenting with different vocal tones when singing. Autotune is a powerful tool & can produce some incredible results with some experimentation. Your bars are niceeee! Got them rider flows going on! 🚗 We hope you come back for even more & share your upcoming tracks with us!! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

☝🏾BIGSWYPER🦊

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

NealMoonTPJlife

5 years ago