Hi @12356!
Welcome to our feedback of 'I wrote Rhyme for a Living'! π₯
Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat.
However, we love the choice of beat here, it has a strong, punchy bassline and works well for this track.
Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨
You have real conviction in your delivery on the track, which is great. The hook is powerful and has meaning, absolutely loved it. On your next track it would be great to have longer verses to show off your lyrical ability and flows.
Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. πYou let the beat breathe for a while in this track. This can be rally effective just makes sure you don't leave it for too long.
Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€
We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @12356! Welcome to our feedback of 'I wrote Rhyme for a Living'! π₯ Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. However, we love the choice of beat here, it has a strong, punchy bassline and works well for this track. Good rhyme scheme here, keep spitting like this! β¨ You have real conviction in your delivery on the track, which is great. The hook is powerful and has meaning, absolutely loved it. On your next track it would be great to have longer verses to show off your lyrical ability and flows. Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. πYou let the beat breathe for a while in this track. This can be rally effective just makes sure you don't leave it for too long. Just a few tweaks and this track is almost there, keep grinding! π€ We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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