Hi there @lil.oreo.,
Here's some feedback on your track 'ONE DAY', thank you for sharing with us! 💥
Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧
Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
This beat is working well for you! 🎼
We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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1st song ONE DAY BY Lil Oreo #justforfun #rapfame #rapcommunity #rapchat #hiphip
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#LilOreo pass thru my 3 new songs
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi there @lil.oreo., Here's some feedback on your track 'ONE DAY', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 Try developing and mixing up your flows to keep listeners on their toes. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. This beat is working well for you! 🎼 We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! 👌 We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Dropping tracks like Michelin-star dishes, top quality! 🍽️ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥