Wassup @lijames,
Thank you for sharing 'lil Jame$ - 80 BARS (Freestyle)' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us:
Perfecting your rhymes will help give your bars more structure and purpose.
Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat.
This beat is working well for you! πΌ
The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit!
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Wassup @lijames, Thank you for sharing 'lil Jame$ - 80 BARS (Freestyle)' with our community π₯. Here is a little feedback from us: Perfecting your rhymes will help give your bars more structure and purpose. Your flow here needs improvement, try and work on this for your next track. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. This beat is working well for you! πΌ The best rappers practice more than everyone else! Keep going and there's no limit! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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