#sms_save my soul
cheeky leaky peaky sneaky its wat i feel like boom tik tok time goes by not a sec is to be wasted hastened sacred from our divine God thats so creative cooperative educative too many reasons to live i ain't got nothing to die for cause am into sin bur Gods grace is overwhelming and shielding and dats enough to get me past my trials daily always begging to be free from all iniquities bur feeling worse all day cause am still digging deep. chorus save ma sooooooul today*2 make me whole again*2 fill my cuuuup today lord fill my cuuuuup today. wuu now i can feel the ecstasy tendency to do right in the sight of troubles yeah now i know why i felt real different i can see that I'm different from the rest. boom π₯ lord save my soooouuul today*2 waking up daily dats one blessing getting what to eat and that's another blessing sheltered and cleen still another blessing i give gratitude cause am always feeling good. save my soul almighty
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cheeky leaky peaky sneaky its wat i feel like boom tik tok time goes by not a sec is to be wasted hastened sacred from our divine God thats so creative cooperative educative too many reasons to live i ain't got nothing to die for cause am into sin bur Gods grace is overwhelming and shielding and dats enough to get me past my trials daily always begging to be free from all iniquities bur feeling worse all day cause am still digging deep. chorus save ma sooooooul today*2 make me whole again*2 fill my cuuuup today lord fill my cuuuuup today. wuu now i can feel the ecstasy tendency to do right in the sight of troubles yeah now i know why i felt real different i can see that I'm different from the rest. boom π₯ lord save my soooouuul today*2 waking up daily dats one blessing getting what to eat and that's another blessing sheltered and cleen still another blessing i give gratitude cause am always feeling good. save my soul almighty
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
What's up @saintcarl, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at '#sms_save my soul'! π₯ The mix is just a lil' vocal heavy. Bring the vocals down a bit and it'll sit much better in the mix. Work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. Good choice of beat here! πΌ The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
This heavy vibe π₯ like #kola
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
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