Hey @lukehannah,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Black Bottles (03:42:43)'! π₯
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ
Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ
We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them.
This tracks makes our heads bop, just a little more work and you could defo get there!
Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€
We can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: On point π― Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Hey @lukehannah, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Black Bottles (03:42:43)'! π₯ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. πΆ Yess, we are liking this beat with your bars! πΌ We need to clean up the recording quality here, play around with it and see what you can do! The effects are a bit too much for this track, try not to overuse them. This tracks makes our heads bop, just a little more work and you could defo get there! Just a couple small changes and this track would really be a testament to your skills! π€ We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯