๐ TRAGIC PAST ๐
Lyrics: Let me share a story โbout my tragic past weโre gonna take a tiny moment to examine facts I was a little kid when everybody stabbed my back I never asked for that: all these panic attacks I wasnโt supposed to be alive, they called it mission abort my fucking father raped my mom, he hit and called her a whore mom and dad were gettinโ divorced, no way I was winning this war things were getting ugly I considered living no more felt already dead inside, but I knew Iโd die again tried to join the other side, another suicide attempt any will to live is gone, when you feel you donโt belong I screamed and shook my fist at God and asked him โwhyโd you do me wrong?โ bullies make my life a hell I scream โIโm not afraid of you!โ they tell me โhave a shitty dayโ I hope the same happens to you cuz then youโd finally understand, all the shit I go through a single penny to my name, but in the end youโll float too these fucking clowns will have no clue, what the fuck hit โem when I finally make it big, Iโmma say โI told youโ they say revenge is served cold, bitch you got some snow shoes? wait thatโs no use, freeze below 602 on god Iโm coming for your throat fool, Iโmma show you your hate is old news, fucking nothings where it goes to So let me share this fucking story โbout my tragic past Weโre gonna take a tiny moment to examine facts I was a little kid when everybody stabbed my back These motherfuckers wanna kill me, I ainโt havinโ that One day Iโll see myself look back upon the legend Iโve made Iโm growing stronger by the day and no exceptions are made I see the heavenly gates These haters jealous of me these haters only say my name for 20 seconds of fame So if you get in my way, then motherfuck what you say Yeah, motherfuck what you say THANKS FOR LISTENING ๐ #rapfame #rap #hiphop #hot #moderator_en #TragicPast #piercedcrimson #2021 @creoledagreat @sinless @tmbeatz @sk8board @chooseyourfighter
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Lyrics: Let me share a story โbout my tragic past weโre gonna take a tiny moment to examine facts I was a little kid when everybody stabbed my back I never asked for that: all these panic attacks I wasnโt supposed to be alive, they called it mission abort my fucking father raped my mom, he hit and called her a whore mom and dad were gettinโ divorced, no way I was winning this war things were getting ugly I considered living no more felt already dead inside, but I knew Iโd die again tried to join the other side, another suicide attempt any will to live is gone, when you feel you donโt belong I screamed and shook my fist at God and asked him โwhyโd you do me wrong?โ bullies make my life a hell I scream โIโm not afraid of you!โ they tell me โhave a shitty dayโ I hope the same happens to you cuz then youโd finally understand, all the shit I go through a single penny to my name, but in the end youโll float too these fucking clowns will have no clue, what the fuck hit โem when I finally make it big, Iโmma say โI told youโ they say revenge is served cold, bitch you got some snow shoes? wait thatโs no use, freeze below 602 on god Iโm coming for your throat fool, Iโmma show you your hate is old news, fucking nothings where it goes to So let me share this fucking story โbout my tragic past Weโre gonna take a tiny moment to examine facts I was a little kid when everybody stabbed my back These motherfuckers wanna kill me, I ainโt havinโ that One day Iโll see myself look back upon the legend Iโve made Iโm growing stronger by the day and no exceptions are made I see the heavenly gates These haters jealous of me these haters only say my name for 20 seconds of fame So if you get in my way, then motherfuck what you say Yeah, motherfuck what you say THANKS FOR LISTENING ๐ #rapfame #rap #hiphop #hot #moderator_en #TragicPast #piercedcrimson #2021 @creoledagreat @sinless @tmbeatz @sk8board @chooseyourfighter
I give real feedback because thatโs what I prefer โ Iโm only on this app to get better and itโs the only way to get better at this art. The story is compelling. You could use a hook to fill up the dead space between verses. I think the thing that would improve your sound the most is using a solid DAW (eg Logic Pro if youโre a Mac user but there are lots of options) along some plug ins. YouTube videos can walk you through mixing and mastering in your DAW. Iโm not a fan of autotune but some compression, eq and reverb could go a long way toward getting features. Keep up the good work.
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lyrics ILL ๐คข sick talented flows homie
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Nice content, bringing great energy/track presence on this bro. Mix is solid as well, Id employ using a Deesser in your mix though to curb those plosives showing up in your vocals (popping p's). strong track bro
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