๐Ÿ’” TRAGIC PAST ๐Ÿ’”

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๐Ÿ’” TRAGIC PAST ๐Ÿ’”

Lyrics: Let me share a story โ€˜bout my tragic past weโ€™re gonna take a tiny moment to examine facts I was a little kid when everybody stabbed my back I never asked for that: all these panic attacks I wasnโ€™t supposed to be alive, they called it mission abort my fucking father raped my mom, he hit and called her a whore mom and dad were gettinโ€™ divorced, no way I was winning this war things were getting ugly I considered living no more felt already dead inside, but I knew Iโ€™d die again tried to join the other side, another suicide attempt any will to live is gone, when you feel you donโ€™t belong I screamed and shook my fist at God and asked him โ€œwhyโ€™d you do me wrong?โ€ bullies make my life a hell I scream โ€œIโ€™m not afraid of you!โ€ they tell me โ€œhave a shitty dayโ€ I hope the same happens to you cuz then youโ€™d finally understand, all the shit I go through a single penny to my name, but in the end youโ€™ll float too these fucking clowns will have no clue, what the fuck hit โ€˜em when I finally make it big, Iโ€™mma say โ€œI told youโ€ they say revenge is served cold, bitch you got some snow shoes? wait thatโ€™s no use, freeze below 602 on god Iโ€™m coming for your throat fool, Iโ€™mma show you your hate is old news, fucking nothings where it goes to So let me share this fucking story โ€˜bout my tragic past Weโ€™re gonna take a tiny moment to examine facts I was a little kid when everybody stabbed my back These motherfuckers wanna kill me, I ainโ€™t havinโ€™ that One day Iโ€™ll see myself look back upon the legend Iโ€™ve made Iโ€™m growing stronger by the day and no exceptions are made I see the heavenly gates These haters jealous of me these haters only say my name for 20 seconds of fame So if you get in my way, then motherfuck what you say Yeah, motherfuck what you say THANKS FOR LISTENING ๐Ÿ™ #rapfame #rap #hiphop #hot #moderator_en #TragicPast #piercedcrimson #2021 @creoledagreat @sinless @tmbeatz @sk8board @chooseyourfighter

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I give real feedback because thatโ€™s what I prefer โ€” Iโ€™m only on this app to get better and itโ€™s the only way to get better at this art. The story is compelling. You could use a hook to fill up the dead space between verses. I think the thing that would improve your sound the most is using a solid DAW (eg Logic Pro if youโ€™re a Mac user but there are lots of options) along some plug ins. YouTube videos can walk you through mixing and mastering in your DAW. Iโ€™m not a fan of autotune but some compression, eq and reverb could go a long way toward getting features. Keep up the good work.

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This is deep ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ’ซ๐ŸŒŸ

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lyrics ILL ๐Ÿคข sick talented flows homie

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5 years ago

Tough track fam nice

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5 years ago

FEATURE WERE U AT

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5 years ago

YOOO 200 LIKES ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช

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5 years ago

Nice content, bringing great energy/track presence on this bro. Mix is solid as well, Id employ using a Deesser in your mix though to curb those plosives showing up in your vocals (popping p's). strong track bro

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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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5 years ago

#MissUSisGh love u sis Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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5 years ago

wow bro, this is deep๐Ÿ’ฏ amazing storytelling fr

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5 years ago

Lemme mix ya tracks bro, on Bandlab

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Keep grinding โœŠ Respect ๐Ÿคœ๐Ÿค› ๐Ÿ›ธ๐Ÿชโ™พ๏ธโœ…๏ธ ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿซก๐Ÿ™ Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

24 days ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

27 days ago

Champion ๐Ÿ† FIRE ๐Ÿ”ฅ Money ๐Ÿ’ธ Bars: Great ๐ŸŽ‰ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

1 month ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

2 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

2 months ago

Legend! ๐Ÿ‘‘ Also check out my music too Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

2 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

2 months ago

Bars: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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