in my minds eye
idk whats right
up at night
wishin i could rewind
been thru some fucked up shit
but its time to survive
wake up wishin i had a different life
up on repeat
dont know how to skip a beat
every curve head to feet
cant wait for the destination to meet
could never give it away
stash away keepin the deed
im just gonna sit back smoke this weed
keep my mind right
no matter how many nights
making the choice that i knows right
staying in my lane
driving on the highway
tryna make a mthfer drive straight
alwaya on time but she giving me every reason to be late
been keepin to myself ever since i got locked out heavens gates
never will you know of how much is at stake
so im gonna take a deep breath
and think for heaven's sake
Yo @tylergibbs.8370!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'minds eye'!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat.
Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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in my minds eye idk whats right up at night wishin i could rewind been thru some fucked up shit but its time to survive wake up wishin i had a different life up on repeat dont know how to skip a beat every curve head to feet cant wait for the destination to meet could never give it away stash away keepin the deed im just gonna sit back smoke this weed keep my mind right no matter how many nights making the choice that i knows right staying in my lane driving on the highway tryna make a mthfer drive straight alwaya on time but she giving me every reason to be late been keepin to myself ever since i got locked out heavens gates never will you know of how much is at stake so im gonna take a deep breath and think for heaven's sake
good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding 😎 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Perfect 💯
#thisguydead Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Yo @tylergibbs.8370! Waddup - let's take a look at 'minds eye'! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Nice 🔥🔥💯
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