Hey @loyalboy!
Thanks for sharing 'mama i made it' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track.
Your vocals are really loud over the beat, put em down for a perfect mix. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @loyalboy! Thanks for sharing 'mama i made it' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Your vocals are really loud over the beat, put em down for a perfect mix. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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