first free style

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Wake up in the morning, And I'm down bad, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, Gotta make some cash, Call my bro up quick, Come get me fast, Say he got somethings, On his mind to do, Give him about an hour, Then he's coming through, Heard him beep the horn, Then I ran out, Money on my mind, No more handouts, Get my pen and pad, I'm about to write some more, Hit that stage then tell them, Turn the lights down low, Open up my mouth, I heard the crowd scream go, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, We about to make it rapping, We are about to make it happen, Yeah.

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Edwin Kollie

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5 years ago

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Queen Shirley

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

🎑MASTERCEREMONY/M.C SOULO

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @edwinkollie! Welcome to our feedback of 'first free style '! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Garry Teague

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Rashawn Black

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

MELLOW/LIGHTSHOW✝️⭐️

5 years ago

peep my pin track Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

The 1 one

2 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥