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Hey @tlove1984, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'COLUMBIA PICTURES (10:51:13 PM)'! π₯ You got bars! Lyrics are on point, we like 'em a lot. π Your rhyming is tight. β¨ This track defo has meaning, what a great way to engage your listeners. π We rate your bars on this one but feel you could come with a lil more emphasis in your delivery! That being said you're stuck to this beat like super glue, we don't think its even possible for you to miss the beat π― This beat is working well for you! πΌ We love those vocal samples! π£ The recording is a little fuzzy on this one tho, try improving the sound quality if you can. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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