Hey @millious_!
Thanks for sharing 'Bioactive - While I shoot You (Audio Tease) Feat. Millious' with us!
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well.
Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit?
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @millious_! Thanks for sharing 'Bioactive - While I shoot You (Audio Tease) Feat. Millious' with us! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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