Black metal creep in
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if you a gambling man then come place your bets cuz when yo chips are down My shit will leave you in debt yo I'm the black metal rapper but don't get it twisted im the Whitest motherfucker that ever existed when I say black I mean evil and bitch that ain't no cap if metal ain't your thing You probably shop at the gap My rhymes gonna haunt ya and leave y'all shook catch Y'all up for the devil. I spit hot fire with fishooks
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CHECC MY SHIT OUT WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE ๐ฏ Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Hey @djarektrevosky! Thanks for sharing 'Black metal creep in' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Pure talent on the mic, bar-raising with every verse! ๐ค Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ