Hey @flamenoir!
Thanks for sharing 'le début' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track!
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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flamenco
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 6/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Nice 🌟 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @flamenoir! Thanks for sharing 'le début' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
demain je vais sortir un nouveau rap
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥