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shout out to kidcoin mixdown. yea we on this mixdown ya girl see me comin, she all on my dick now. catch her ass sucking I say damn you got a big mouth. check the watch and the chain, know who I am? best stay in your lane. have ya ass shot and hop on a plane. I do this for fortune so fuck all that fame. when I'm on they gone be screaming my name. you ain't on shit but a walk of shame. ain't no fucking joke when the semi get to bustin. if you want the smoke then your ass I'm dustin. I try to stay humble. but humble doesn't pay I try to be nice but homie dont play. the ak of the rap game if we was talking bullets them bitches would slap mane.
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Hey @blakeward! Thanks for sharing 'when I'm on' with us! Your voice sounds super clear, keep recording like that! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Good choice of beat! The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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