Pain in my life

Name: Pain in my life
Description: First bars I’ve ever written and I’m not gonna lie it felt good. Everyone deals with different pains and have different stories to tell, this is mine... #lifepain#raplife#londonrap#realrap

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First bars I’ve ever written and I’m not gonna lie it felt good. Everyone deals with different pains and have different stories to tell, this is mine... #lifepain#raplife#londonrap#realrap

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peppz

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5 years ago

First bars I’ve ever written and I’m not gonna lie it felt good. Everyone deals with different pains and have different stories to tell, this is mine... #lifepain#raplife#londonrap#realrap

peppz

Author

5 years ago

@djeagles okay is good enough for me considering it’s my first ever time, writing, rapping and even trying a ting....thank

Reed Kenny

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

NealMoonTPJlife

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

O.G.NOLUV💪💪💯💯

5 years ago

nice track mama salute BEAUTIFUL and keep it up

Legendary War Ready

5 years ago

very nice track here salute

Bake Bean Productions

5 years ago

Big up the UK drillers. Bars are good but you now wanna work on how you deliver. At the moment your mono tone. It's all one level. Be creative and elvate your bars. Add your own line of creativity to it. As you here it inside of you, say it out loud. All the best.

𝓞𝓷𝓪𝓼𝓽𝔂 🎤🔒

5 years ago

Good track 💯💯💯💯🎶🎶🎶🎶🔥🔥🔥 Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

DJ eagle

5 years ago

I mean it's okay

F.STAR.B JOJO

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Fatz Pepperstein

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @peppz! Welcome to our feedback of 'Pain in my life'! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Your rhyming is dope, it sounds real nice. The beat is fire, nice choice. Dope recording, nicely done. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Cato Kirin Casper

5 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

💥Mr.Lil Nutt🐿️(A.B.R Mobb)💥

5 days ago

Tag This ⭐ Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Marckel🗽🎤🤴🏾♎️⚖️

3 months ago

WAKE EM UP 🗣️🔊 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

O.T.3 CAMO

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥