Hey @dapac!
Thanks for sharing 'Passion' with us!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
speak up in the mic π but keep going π₯π₯π―
Bars: 9/10
Delivery: 9/10
Impression: 9/10
Bars: Dope π₯
Delivery: Dope π₯
Impression: Dope π₯
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Hey @dapac! Thanks for sharing 'Passion' with us! The beat is fire, nice choice. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
speak up in the mic π but keep going π₯π₯π― Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Come thru 3 songs up on my page
guys ot was my first one sorry its bad
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Nice
This sound good
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯