Its getting harder and harder just to breathe//
Struggling trying to keep myself from falling beneath//
I’m On my knees praying to God help me please//
Its Snowing outside feels like it’s a hundred degrees//
Feel like I’m Being followed around everywhere I go//
Im Strapped up my words are ready to flow.
I don’t have nothing to lose but they don’t Know
That.. people think I’m tripping out and paranoid .
I’m high as giraffe pussy im no patient of Freud.
I try to Keep to myself cuz I’m easily annoyed
Everytime I use drugs my life gets destroyed.
I know better but I always do it anyways.
insanity same results but on different day.
Always chasing a high trying to keepa my fade.
I was clean for 3 years thought I finally got away.
Demons whispered in my ear , you cant escape.
You can run but you cant hide from us.
Come have some fun and ride with us.
Get high with us. We’ll take away the pain.
Intravenously rushing straight to the brain
IInstantaneously losing again..damn shame
Hi @keredseram!
Welcome to our feedback of 'T.O.S.O.T.T.'!
The vocals sound great, nicely done!
Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics.
We like the rhyming, it's tight. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Its getting harder and harder just to breathe// Struggling trying to keep myself from falling beneath// I’m On my knees praying to God help me please// Its Snowing outside feels like it’s a hundred degrees// Feel like I’m Being followed around everywhere I go// Im Strapped up my words are ready to flow. I don’t have nothing to lose but they don’t Know That.. people think I’m tripping out and paranoid . I’m high as giraffe pussy im no patient of Freud. I try to Keep to myself cuz I’m easily annoyed Everytime I use drugs my life gets destroyed. I know better but I always do it anyways. insanity same results but on different day. Always chasing a high trying to keepa my fade. I was clean for 3 years thought I finally got away. Demons whispered in my ear , you cant escape. You can run but you cant hide from us. Come have some fun and ride with us. Get high with us. We’ll take away the pain. Intravenously rushing straight to the brain IInstantaneously losing again..damn shame
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
All these lames they just trying to take your shit💯💣
Hi @keredseram! Welcome to our feedback of 'T.O.S.O.T.T.'! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. We like the rhyming, it's tight. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥