Dumbness

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I'm new and this is my song When I cook some ham everybody wanna taste that , Too bad, Its only for the best lad . Verse 2 My teacher said I'm lazy and incurable , You know I'm good so irresistible, I eat everything that's on the table , There are three things in life I treasure the most My mama , mo Salah and some nice bananas ayy, Chorus: I'm ron ! I'm ron ! I'm ron ! I'm Ron! give me some of your toblerone , If you don't have that, Please be gone !

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F.STAR.B JOJO

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

🔥(BBG) NinoSnow 🔥

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

NealMoonTPJlife

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

AsianAssassin

5 years ago

I'm irish korean and my kids are half Filipino quarter irish quarter korean.

Scenario Devine

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @ghostedayee! Thanks for sharing 'Dumbness' with us! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! Good choice of beat! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Da'Kari Pruitt-Walker

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Ghosted ayee

Author

5 years ago

I'm new this is my song

The 1 one

19 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Waxy Gordon

6 months ago