in my mind
all i ever did was care for you so why do me like this try to make you happy but you hurt me now im pissed is what im seeing real or is it just in my head im seeing red and the tears that i shed could it all be misled right or wrong gotta tread to get the facts some people know how to hide put on an act riding around with Aladdin keeps me distracted pain and sorrow i adapted gettin mad how im reacting but keeping the front intact seeing through you like you casper but unfriendly you a buster cause im ghostin you now dont care see how much i ment to you like wow days later hittin me up cause you mss me stfu pipe down thats what you miss dont be hiitin me with B.S took.to much stress from you trying be that dude you can rely on but i was that dude you lien on so bye im gone all i ever did was care for you so why do me like this try to make you happy but you hurt me now im pissed hmm
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all i ever did was care for you so why do me like this try to make you happy but you hurt me now im pissed is what im seeing real or is it just in my head im seeing red and the tears that i shed could it all be misled right or wrong gotta tread to get the facts some people know how to hide put on an act riding around with Aladdin keeps me distracted pain and sorrow i adapted gettin mad how im reacting but keeping the front intact seeing through you like you casper but unfriendly you a buster cause im ghostin you now dont care see how much i ment to you like wow days later hittin me up cause you mss me stfu pipe down thats what you miss dont be hiitin me with B.S took.to much stress from you trying be that dude you can rely on but i was that dude you lien on so bye im gone all i ever did was care for you so why do me like this try to make you happy but you hurt me now im pissed hmm
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