Yo @lilajs!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'ACTon AJs last forevr remix'!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly.
This track really makes the listener feel something. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
I only don’t be singing my brother I don’t feel like you got the greatest rhythm that way but keep working on your flow and rhyme scheme and build a freestyle rap I like to hear that
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Yo @lilajs! Waddup - let's take a look at 'ACTon AJs last forevr remix'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Work on your timing a little to make sure you hit the beat perfectly. This track really makes the listener feel something. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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I only don’t be singing my brother I don’t feel like you got the greatest rhythm that way but keep working on your flow and rhyme scheme and build a freestyle rap I like to hear that
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥