Decantation (21:04)
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let get this straight you mad cause your bm is at my house playing trick or treat sometime high and seek in the sheet the truth is boy you weak like the air that a dead man breath im the type that will dismanuel like a pistol these words im speaking man it so a official i have dogs that come and dont need to hear a whistle to eat you up til you scar tissue that sound like a issue do you need some tissue i really meant this to dis you if you mad dont worried listen to the rest of the story see i have a 45 name mariah carey only difference is when you hear her spit you start to wonder how many bullet she carries
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let get this straight you mad cause your bm is at my house playing trick or treat sometime high and seek in the sheet the truth is boy you weak like the air that a dead man breath im the type that will dismanuel like a pistol these words im speaking man it so a official i have dogs that come and dont need to hear a whistle to eat you up til you scar tissue that sound like a issue do you need some tissue i really meant this to dis you if you mad dont worried listen to the rest of the story see i have a 45 name mariah carey only difference is when you hear her spit you start to wonder how many bullet she carries
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Yo @laseanyoung! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Decantation (21:04)'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Seriously fire delivery, that's dope!! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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